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Fleurdelacour
03-10-2003, 05:31 PM
I wrote this last night into the early hours of the morning :p ;) Just read, oh yes, review too. I like reviews :)


Memento Mori




January was always a miserable month. Christmas was over, New Years was over, and the weather was typically British, freezing cold, windy, and always raining, day in day out…


January 2009 was no exception.

*

Ron had only just received his driving licence. He had finally succumbed to driving the Muggle vehicles after he discovered that Floo Powder doesn’t help when wanting to get to Muggle localities. He was on top of the world, he was engaged to Priscilla Waterman, and he had a new car, one of those black BMWs, those rather slick models.

Ron often thought about visiting some of his old friends from Hogwarts, Hermione Granger and Harry Potter, however, he suspected that they’d be too occupied with their high flying careers to be bothered with a mediocre man who relatively liked his new car.

He’d often pop around (well it was a good few miles) to visit his Mum and Dad back at the Burrow, cruising down the M5 in his new motor.

The garden had now overgrown, and gnomes had overpowered Molly’s tossing techniques, and made little burrows amongst the bushes. Ron laughed as he approached The Burrow, watching the little gnomes dance around the garden.

“Oh my!” Molly giggled, putting the plate she was washing down. She stared out the window and saw the shiny black BMW pull up on the grassy verge outside the house. “Arthur! One of our children has decided to come back!” Molly shrieked, wiped her hands on her apron, pulled the floral apron off and over her head, and ran outside to greet her beloved child. Arthur, now lethargic in age, was ambling sluggishly behind Molly, leaning on his knobbly old walking stick.

“Who is it Molly?” Arthur called, limping on, whacking a gnome with his stick.

“It’s Ron! Ron! Oh my goodness! Ron!” Molly beamed, as she saw her youngest son glide out of the car and run his hand through the mop of red hair. Ron grinned back, and strolled towards his mother.

“Sorry, I should’ve called Mum!” Ron laughed. He loomed over Molly, his gawky arms wrapping her in his warm embrace.

“Oh have we missed your laughter Ron, have we missed you.” Molly soothed, patting her son’s head with the same affection she had for him fifteen years ago. She pulled out of the kindly cuddle, and held Ron’s long arms. “Oh look at you Ron. You’re engaged, with a car, oh we’re so proud of you aren’t we Arthur?”

“Yes! Oh of course! You’ve done well for yourself, very proud, yes, very proud indeed.” Arthur beamed at his son, eliminating the twenty nine year old man with pride and love.

It wasn’t long before Ron had to leave the Burrow and say his goodbyes. He hadn’t stopped smiling all afternoon, and nothing was going to stop him from smiling. All was good with the world, he even thought the gnomes were smiling with him as she jingled his keys in his hands and looked at his car with pride. “Wonderful isn’t it?” He said to himself, strolling with the impression of a millionaire. “Life? It’s amazing how one man can have everything in the world, and not worry about anything.”

The car started up, he waved at his parents as he drove out of the Burrow, leaving all his weird childhood memories behind.

Ron was complete, he had everything a man could dream for, he wanted kids though, but that’d come with time. He thought of names for a boy, as he turned onto the M5. “Alexander is nice, oh so is William, yes I like those. Imagine a little red headed lad running around with Priscilla’s smirk.” He sighed with pleasure, as his trail of thought grew longer by the second. “Stella and Audrey, they’re bloody great names for girls too… Brown hair and blue yes, yes, they’ll be twins, tall, clever, and they’ll love Quidditch. Yes, a Quidditch loving family.”

Ron started to laugh, he indicated into the fast-lane as he chortled. The car was silent only for Ron’s continuous outbursts of laughter. He decided to put some feel good music on, some jazzy music, something classy from the beginning of the decade. “Mm, Norah Jones,” he thought. He needed her relaxed voice and her contemplative lyrics to calm him down a little bit.

Ron kept his eyes focused on the road ahead as he fiddled with a few buttons on the car stereo that would ensure he’d have some Norah Jones to chill out to. The album started off with ‘Don’t Know Why’, Ron’s personal favourite. He upped the volume, and let himself unwind to her glorious vocals.

Out across the endless sea

I would die in ecstasy

But I’ll be a bag of bones

Driving down the road alone

Ron felt his relaxed eyes close. He fell into a deep sleep, his hands still on the driving wheel, a smile lingering on his face, Norah’s gentle voice telling him to sleep, it’d be a quicker way of getting to London if he got his forty winks…

Colli
03-10-2003, 05:49 PM
:D It's always weird to read fics about the future... because we're assuming Harry lives. ;)

Anyway, I'm terrible at reviews, but I know what I like. ;) Good job!

StarGazr
03-10-2003, 07:51 PM
very interesting take on the future of Ron Weasley. Good job (I would write something more inspriring, but I just wrote a paper for my English Lit course and... ugh I'm worn out)

lithorose
03-10-2003, 09:47 PM
Yep, January sucks.

Interesting beginning, but I have a few questions:

Wouldn't Ron just Apparate everywhere?

Where'd Ron get $ for a BMW?

One of our children has decided to come back!This doesn't seem quite like something Molly would say, too detatched. Molly strikes me as ruled by her emotions. I don't know she'd be able to say anything, she'd be too busy running out there to hug him to death. Mostly I want to hear more about how Ron got where he is, and where the story is going.:)

Oh, and who's Norah Jones?:confused:

Colli
03-10-2003, 11:25 PM
:D She's this singer who just appeared out of the blue and won all the Grammy's... kinda like The Hours or Chicago if you live in a rural area. :D

Ravenclaw
03-11-2003, 02:06 PM
Oooh, that certainly isn't a good note to end on!

Hey, Colli, if no one in America liked Norah Jones, why'd she win that grammy? lol. I like her.


“Sorry, I should’ve called Mum!”

^^-- I assume you mean via the fireplace? ;-)

Fleurdelacour
03-11-2003, 03:21 PM
Thank you for the reviews! :hug: to everyone!

When we moved from Ireland to England, broke, my dad sold his mini and got a very old black bmw, very cheap ;)

Ron can't get to Muggle places Apperating (I almost wrote Evaporating... Maybe thats where Apperate comes from...)

The creepy thing is, in the car today, Don't Know Why came on the radio... :eek:


I wrote a second chapter, but I don't think its very good... Mmmm


Chapter Two

The rain thundered on the roof of Harry’s top floor apartment in the heart of London. He wished he were in a happier place. He looked outside, the view was incredible from where he was standing. He could see the Houses of Parliament, the London Eye and a few bridges where the green River Thames flowed under. However, he felt nothing. Normally, Harry would look out on to the London skyline smile, and think to himself how lucky he was to have such a marvellous career (His coach had just appointed him as England Quidditch Captain), and he had a wife, Ellie Adams, a sweet girl five years his junior.

But today wasn’t the day to be thinking about happy things, silly little thoughts that he could think of any time he wanted. Today was the worst day of his life.

“Harry?” Ellie whispered, her arm holding onto the top of the glass door that separated the Conservatory from the Lounge. “Do you want a drink?” Harry didn’t answer; he let a single tear drop from his brilliant green eyes. It splashed on to the grey tiles. He left his hands in his pockets where they got hot and sweaty. “You’ll be late Harry. Surely you don’t want that do you?”

“No.” Harry croaked letting another cold tear trickle down his face onto the tiles below. “Mustn’t be late.” Harry gingerly turned around to Ellie. Ellie was dressed, wearing a black Muggle Chanel suit with pearl buttons, she wore semi-transparent stockings and matched it with formal midnight black court pumps. A black beret topped her petite head, which was framed with small blonde ringlets.

Harry himself wore a plain black suit, with a plain black tie, and plain black shoes. He tucked his wand into an inside pocket. He had no use for it, but he felt that he needed it somehow. His wand had helped him through all the tough times in school; he figured he might as well bring the old thing along, for one last hurdle.

“It’s at St. Martin’s. Not far from here.” Ellie turned around, she felt uncomfortable, she had never seen her Harry in such a poignant state before. She just wanted to hug him, make him feel better, despite her urges, she knew she couldn’t. Ellie didn’t think he’d want to be disturbed on a day like this; she thought he must have blamed himself for not keeping in contact…

*

“What’s wrong with Mummy?” Dinah whispered into her sister’s ear, her diminutive fingers playing with the pink lace hem on her dress.

“She’s a tad bit upset, that’s all.” Alice whispered back, not turning around, but gazing at her mother from a distance.

“She’s crying Alice.”

“I am quite aware of that. Daddy said to leave her alone. You don’t want to get in trouble do you?” Alice raised her voice, but only enough so Dinah would know she was being overly inquisitive. “Go and play with your dolls or something.” Dinah wrinkled her nose and folded her arms.

“I am not, you’re not my Mummy. I only do as Mummy says. You’re four years older then me, I’ll be eight one day, and so I can tell you off!” Alice rolled her eyes at her little sister.

“Dinah, I think we should go and leave Mummy in peace.” Dinah pulled a face at Alice then shook her head.

“No.”

“I’ll tell Daddy off you! I’ll scream, I will.”

“You’ll wake the baby.”

“What baby?” Alice muttered blankly, now worrying for the sanity of her little sister.

“Annie, Annie is asleep in the Parlour.”

“Annie?” Alice put her head between her knees and shook her head. “Not your little doll?”

“She’s not a doll! I renamed her; I thought Juliet sounded funny, so I changed it. She’ll scream if you do.”

“Who’ll scream?” Hermione Granger stood a good 5 foot and seven inches from the floor, she wore black tailored trousers, a pale blue shirt, a black jacket, with a necklace of a black stone that a good friend gave her about twelve years ago.

“Her doll, Annie will.” Alice muttered, looking at her mother’s bare feet, fearing the punishment she would receive for spying on her mother.

“Why are you two sitting out here? Why are you spying on me?” Hermione asked, giving her two daughters angry stares.

“I heard you crying.” Dinah mumbled, looking into her mother’s red eyes. “You were upset.”

“Yes. But I must be going now. Daddy will look after you. Go to him, NOW!” Hermione wasn’t in a mood to be reckoned with, she felt horribly empty and sick. She felt misty and dizzy, like she’d been drugged. This time, more tears came; she let out a few more sobs before returning back to her bedroom to put the radio on.


Hermione looked for music in times of loss and sorrow. She switched on the old radio, and tuned it into a Muggle station; she didn’t really want to be part of the Wizarding World right at that moment.

Come on in

I’ve got to tell you what a state I'm in

I’ve got to tell you in my loudest tones

That I started looking for a warning sign.

When the truth is

I miss you.

Yeah the truth is

That I miss you so.

And I’m tired

I should not have let you go.

The Coldplay song ended. Hermione’s body shook with grief and emotion. She hated herself for not keeping in contact. She missed him enormously. Hermione sighed, and let out a heartfelt sob. Crying manically, she got out a black handkerchief from her outside pocket, patted her eyes dry, and blew her nose. “I must do this.”

***

Fleurdelacour
03-15-2003, 05:10 PM
Is it that bad? I'm a pessimist... Is it really that rubbish?

Colli
03-15-2003, 05:23 PM
:o No, sorry. :) I was just in a hurry when I read it the first time and didn't have time to post then and there.. and forgot to come back.

Keep going!

Elfëa
03-15-2003, 05:27 PM
Hmm...

Don't really know what to say - you show different view points, of characters that we know to be connected, but if it weren't fanfiction we'd be totally lost.

Colli - Future fics are weird - but they can easily have "out of character" characters, as there might have been events that change them ;)

I dislike the use of Nora Jones and Coldplay, as they're contemporary artits. - You're making the future be our present, which isn't correct ;) Well, not at least if Hermione and Ron have several kids.

Why can't Ron get to Burrow by Apparating. And, Dumbledore can get to Muggle place - Privet Drive by Apparating. You have to explain why he can't if you make him do something illogical. :p

Grammatically:

“She’s a tad bit upset, that’s all.” Alice whispered back

Should be comma instead of dot. And this is repeating all the time. :)