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katzpotter
06-28-2003, 12:18 AM
Right. I wrote this poem earlier this week to help... I dunno... show my feelings about The Death. And it's a bit long. So, without further ado... except to warn you that there are major spoilers, I present you with:

Lament for the Lost Marauder

Dogstar, Padfoot, many names had you,
Sirius Black, dog of pranks,
We will sorely miss you.
We owe you our thanks.

For embarrassing Snape,
When none could do so.
For brightening our lives.
Why'd you have to go?

It was J.K.'s fault.
She killed you off.
What was that curse?
It's caused us all to scoff.

Not Avada Kedavra;
There was no green light.
You vanished behind the veil;
You disappeared from sight.

We're missing you a lot.
Sirius, why did you have to die?
You helped along the plot.
You made us all cry.

She had a reason;
She always does.
But we're still sad,
And we're still mad.

Curse J.K., we all want to.
But it's a thing only wizards
Are capable to do.
Gosh, we'll miss you.

You're gone now,
Gone from Harry's life.
You're gone from us,
Gone from our lives.

You grew up in hell.
Your mother hated you.
You knew very well
Where you'd run off to.
James, Prongs, your best friend.
Pranksters, Messrs.;
He met an untimely end.
You are with him.

Remus, Moony, God bless him,
Werewolf, prankster,
And you were still his friend.
He will miss you.

Peter, Wormtail, slimy traitor.
You escaped Azkaban
To keep him from Harry.
He betrayed you.

And you, Padfoot, innocent man,
Prankster, Godfather,
Escaped man.
Gone are you.

This lament,
It cannot go on.
You aren't here;
You are gone.

Sirius, I'm sorry,
This is all I can offer.
A lament for you, Padfoot:
The Lost Marauder.

Tell me what you think, please... I desire feedback.

Colli
06-28-2003, 12:28 AM
Colli starts crying again :(

katzpotter
06-28-2003, 01:01 AM
Awwwww... It makes me cry every time I read it, too. And then there's a song that reminds me of Siri... 'Bring Me To Life' by Evanescence. I don't know why it reminds me of him, but every time I hear it I start thinking about him and start crying. Yeah.:( Poor Siri.

xKatiexBellx
06-30-2003, 08:31 AM
Beautiful:notworthy :( :clap: :clap: :clap:

katzpotter
06-30-2003, 09:00 PM
Aww... thanks. Sooner or later, I'll paint my painting of The Death. For now, I'll just settle with doodles.

God bless him.....

Found another song.... 'Do You Hear the People Sing?' from Les Miz.

It reminds me of the war, and the line:
"The blood of the martyrs will water the meadows of France!" makes me tear up... Sirius was a martyr. God, let him go to Heaven...

Marchwarden
07-07-2003, 02:19 AM
I keep thinking I can get all the way to the end of the lament without tearing up.

Last stanza still gets me every time.:( :( (we need a weeping 'smilie')

Severus Snape
07-07-2003, 03:22 PM
Shed a tear! :(

Here's a nice little poem!

http://home.nethere.net/dubhridir/nesbitc/snapebg4.jpg

katzpotter
07-07-2003, 08:08 PM
Lovely, Severus. Marchwarden, I completely agree.

And I've found another song! How lucky am I?
Goodbye To You, by Michelle Branch. The last few lines really got me.

And when the stars fall
I will lie awake
'Cause you're my shooting star....

By the way, Marchwarden, I've got the Round Robin thread up....

Severus Snape
07-12-2003, 10:53 AM
Originally posted by Marchwarden
I keep thinking I can get all the way to the end of the lament without tearing up.

Last stanza still gets me every time.:( :( (we need a weeping 'smilie')

Try: www.clicksmilies.com

http://www.click-smilies.de/sammlung/traurig/sad-smiley-047.gif

katzpotter
07-13-2003, 02:44 AM
Ooh, nice one, Sev. Can I call you Sev? Alas, I have found no more songs, but I HAVE found a website for fans in denial. Namely, me. I joined. Go me. PM me for the link, if you wish to see it.

Bellatrix_Lestrange
07-15-2003, 12:47 AM
Well done, Katzpotter. Like Marchwarden, I was able to hold the line at :( until the last stanza. At that point the
http://www.click-smilies.de/sammlung/traurig/sad-smiley-047.gif
just came out unstoppably.

Severus Snape
07-15-2003, 08:52 AM
Originally posted by katzpotter
Ooh, nice one, Sev. Can I call you Sev? Alas, I have found no more songs, but I HAVE found a website for fans in denial. Namely, me. I joined. Go me. PM me for the link, if you wish to see it.

Sure! I don't mind! :)

katzpotter
07-15-2003, 04:21 PM
Found one! We Are The Champions by Queen

I've paid my dues
Time after time
I've done my sentence
But committed no crime
And bad mistakes
I've made a few
I've had my share of sand
Kicked in my face
But I've come through